Silver Grey Quilts
Poem – What do you think?
I worked on this poem as a work of creative writing and I was hoping receive info. The mission objective is to describe an event or strongly object containing sensory information and pictures. Thank you pour votre aide. Untitled (work it) duvet comfortable cushions cons grass neglected. Usher the warm breezes out on December clouds, winds tinged with the smell fresh earth. crickets and accentuated by the voice of the creatures whisper dark secrets of nature brilliant symphony. Bright Black Sky lit by many lights. Students enormous variety and hungry mouths, savoring every bite of a heavenly banquet. Hunter and the bull to participate in an impasse Eternal, The Seven Sisters is mixed with the Greek heroes, and twins slip for a mythical journey by car, while the queen of the ball slide slowly west – dressed in full, radiant glancing tunica black and gray shadows of a portrait, painted in silver.
I love this poem. There is so much depth and meaning to what is his work could be done with this one? But there are some things I suggest you review more (I could make my point of view in writing customization me, but good) 1. I think that new words to replace "marked" and "many". They just did not flow well for me: S (did you watch the specific structures, such as Iambic Pentameter etc.? Not that you need, look) 2. Sounds like a listing in the form of poem. I do not know if it was the fact that the statements to make, but if they do not realize, perhaps the addition of some elements of history as "and" or "full" or a specific narrator might help. But beyond that, I like it: D
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